One day Aleki and I went into the woods with our family.Then we grabbed some sticks so we could cook our marshmallows with the fire.When it was dinner time we hunted a deer then we cut off the horns and shaved the hair off the deer.
After eating the deer we asked our mum if we could explore the woods at night time.While we were walking Aleki and I saw this creepy cabin.All of a sudden a man came out of the cabin holding an axe that had blood on it.
The man went back into his creepy cabin and then Aleki and I went back to our family and the creepy man was following us but we went quickly inside the house and we started to hide while our family was getting heavy things to block the door but then went away so Aleki and I went to sleep.
By D.J & Aleki
Kia ora. I am Corin from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made it really scary it gave me the shivers
It reminded me of IT
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hi my name is arabella i am 9 years old i go to saint mary's school in
ReplyDeletegisborne. I really liked your creepy story my favorite part was when the
creepy man came out of the cabin matewa arabella
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hi my name is lulu i am 9 years old and I go to st mary's school in gisborne. Amazing story i love how you described what the man was holding
ReplyDeletein his hand. i have 1 question is this a real story?
Ma te wa lulu